Here is an excerpt of my critical review that i had written after the NFC championship game in 2010, in which the eventual SuperBowl Champion New Orleans Saints defeated Brett Favre and the Minnesota Vikings.
As the city of New Orleans began its celebration a sullen and battered Favre made his way to the post game press conference.
As the city of New Orleans began its celebration a sullen and battered Favre made his way to the post game press conference.
An evidently rattled Favre sat with watering eyes and scratches on his face as he began to elaborate on the future. "In a situation like this I really don't want to make a decision right now based on what's happened because I do know the year could not have gone any better aside from us not going to Miami. I really enjoyed it, to be honest.”(Krawcynski) Throughout the last decade it is not hard to remember all the times we have seen number 4 make the game winning play and march into a press conference in high spirits; what makes this situation so difficult is that we may never get the opportunity to witness the magic again. Here in Denver we have seen firsthand what Brett is capable of; October 29, 2007 Here in Denver, Colorado at Invesco field Brett threw a rocket into the hands of Greg Jennings over the late Darrent Williams to seal a season for the Broncos as they missed the playoffs for consecutive years. It’s hard to imagine that a man playing at his level could even consider retirement but then you realize he’s been doing this longer than most kids spend in a public school system, pretty remarkable in my opinion. And not to mention he has not missed a game ever, 309 consecutive start to be exact but who’s counting?
Your colors are really good, their simple and appealing. Everything is really easy to read and your titles are straight to the point. It looks like you have most of your papers but I don’t see the Critical Assessment on the class, which should be on top. I like the pictures they really add to what you’re saying. Your introductions are very clear and you can tell you took time on this. I also like how your poll is still open a lot of people closed them and only have one vote.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading your entries. The entry about Brett Favre was interesting because I also watched that game and saw how he felt at the end. A few minor grammatical errors such as; i needs to be capitalized and the word eventually needs to be looked at within the Brett Favre entry. That particular sentence just seems jumbled. You are missing your Critical Assessment which should be posted first. As far as your color choices they are good very easy to read, clean gives a feel of precision. I enjoyed looking at your photo choices especially the poster.
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